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Wednesday, August 19, 2009


(I don't know what this is.)

Can't see but going in anyway - home base is a song - heart is in a jar - hat is in a grave - spirit shut down - hopes unfortunate and incompatible - goal hazy - not saving, just getting by - not sent by god - owning the work - rules rewritten - not even sitting at my own table.


Kimberly said...

Very poignant. Well said.

Abbystract said...

I could speculate and offer feedback from a poetic point of view - but I need more info. Are those line breaks intentional? What's the name of the work? From where has the work come? Is it a joke? I'm feeling HAL 9000.

Kimberly said...

I understood it to be an original work from the blogger. Perhaps I was wrong. I interpreted many things on that assumption. Hence, my previous comment.